Title: Tattered

Series: Torn #2

That was an interesting point of view read. Mason is s character you will hate for the many reasons as he tells his side of the story. I enjoyed this story in the fact that the main character was an egotistical male who only thought of himself. Melody’s writing flowed and she gave us Mason’s side of a marriage that became nonexistent. Melody started with Miranda’s story which have yet to finish, but just hearing Mason’s side I feel for Miranda more than Mason. Melody, Mason is a character I can actually hate even knowing his side. You brought to life a man who was only out for himself and I couldn’t feel sorry for him at all. I thoroughly liked your writing of this story, I couldn’t put it down even though Mason was a complete ass.  Mason was selfish as much as Miranda in the sense they couldn’t let go. I will not hold Mason against you because he is just a character you wrote about. This story was pent up frustration at its best. There was love in the beginning, sadness in the middle, and then happiness at the end. The lead up full of angst in order to understand why Mason could love Miranda one minute and not the next. I can’t wait to read what happens in the next part of the series after Mason and Miranda set each other free. 4 Stars